2 comments on “That which Flows Through

  1. The poem appears to me to be a mere tautology,and there are no poetic frills- an image or metaphor
    to hold it up or better sync with the finessed nuance of meaning. One- line flows through the poem iteratively to underpin the micro universe the poem presents.

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